This is my last drawing after the corrections.*****************************************
-Line of action slightly bent
- slightly asimetrical and organic head.
-Big Nose
- Big floppy ears.
- Big Hands.
- Eyes slightly on diferent angles and one on top of each other.
- The eyes have soft corners
- The head have more weight in the bottom.
- The Tail of Spaz is big and heavy, the weight is on the bottom.
- face too streched.- Needs bigger eyes.
- The fingers holding the tail should be better drawn. We should feel that they are grabbing the tail and it has weight.
- Bigger pointy hand.
- The hand that's holding the tail should have a more slithly bent curve.
- The raising ear should be slightly smaller
Man this is hard!
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I decided to do a more easy pose for study (I'm not prepared for Scribner I think, hehe)
Visual Statement:
- The dog is surprised to find Spaz with that particular smell.
Analysis:
Dog
- Clear Line of action
- Big head, little body.
- Big long ears
- Thin arms
- Big hands
- Big Nose.
The focus of this picture is the dog pointing Spaz butt.
Maybe I have to do a bigger pointing hand and put it bellow the arm that holds the tail.What do you think John?
the dog's line of action should be on a bent slight line of action, going right through his body and head
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The tail should look heavy and the bend is low on the tail
don't draw so clean
draw lively first
avoid putting everything in the middle and turning everything into perfect circles and ovals
draw life
ok, thanks, I'm gonna give it another try.
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