Sunday, August 22, 2010

Contrasts: Irv Spence Mouse

UPDATE: I don't know if the feet and arms are good now. This same thing happened to me months ago with the bulldog caricature exercise .
I think I missed the funny factor here and the nose seems to be bad conected.

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UPDATE:


Better?

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Verbal Analysis:
-BIG head compared with little body.
-Little nose compared with the head.
-Little arms and legs.
- Little ears.

Here's my first attempt. What do you think?
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3 comments:

  1. JohnKAugust 23, 2010 at 1:26 PM

    I think you lost the contrasts

    his head is wider than it is high

    and the belly fur is closer to his front than his back fur

    also lost the perspective in the drawing

    what you changed or tried to exaggerate was arbitrary, not specifically caricaturing what was there in the original drawing

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  2. Paul BAugust 23, 2010 at 1:52 PM

    I see....
    I understand.
    I'm gonna give it another try.
    Thanks!

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  3. JohnKAugust 23, 2010 at 6:24 PM

    get his feet and shoulders in better perspective

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