Bugs Bunnyhead is bigger
his line of action has to be more subtle
hat is smaller
Magician
cranium has to be bigger
the external revers of the jacket has to be more out
Again, the line of action in the original drawing is more subtle, more up.The head has to be smaller
the arm with the sword has to be more backwards
Kaspar Bonus!
Man, this are really funny drawings!
it's good but everything is toned down
ReplyDeletetry analyzing all the poses (lines of action) and spaces and attitudes in words first
eg: in picture one the little boy is leaning backwards in his walk
in your drawing you brought him forward, losing his main graphic statement
ok! I will
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