Milt Gross composition

UPDATE!:

better?

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Verbal Analysis:
-opposing poses
-Sharply contrasting sizes
-Poses flow through line of action
-Lots of negative space surrounding the characters
-there is not much background
-There is little background that occupies a third of the image
-the background and the house on the right side, make a frame around the characters

my attempt

Funny Milt Gross Cat!

Verbal Analysis:

- Very curvy LOA!!!
- Thin body
-Clear sillhouette
-Big eyes
-Big Tounge
-Big down lip
-large head, it flows with a curve.
-Big smile behind the eyes.
-Not much inside neg. space.
-Lots of out. neg. space.
-Ears points in diferent directions
-Asymetrical Tail and body
-short legs, the toes points up
-muzzle and nose points up
-Irregular furrSo, here's my attempt. I wanted to give it some cosntruction. It's difficult to maintain the energy of Gross drawings.

Trying to apply the things that I learned :)

Be Aware Of The Levels Within Your Hierarchy

Here are some helpful Posts:
http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2008/08/kurtzman-and-composition.html


http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2008/05/more-bg-layout-note-hierarchy-of-form.html