Wednesday, December 30, 2009

layout and toy study

Here are 2 layouts I made. I found the storyboard drawings on John's blog.

I did the toy study. I think it looks too soft and the construction is could be stronger. His head seems to small as well.





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  1. JohnKDecember 30, 2009 at 2:53 PM

    always include the images you are copying...

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  2. Mitch LeeuweDecember 30, 2009 at 3:08 PM

    fixed it

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  3. JohnKDecember 30, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    In the layout of Slab and Donald:

    Heads too small

    Everything has been toned down.

    Negative spaces within forms have shrunken.

    Needs to be less stiff, more organic: Don't put hard corners on everything.

    All easy fixes.

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