

I look at it now, and I see that I think the left side was rounded off a bit-- his foot and nose should be pushed out further, I think. The ears also look clumsy-- they are rounded off, and the poofs have some lazy detailing.
(As usual, earlier work can be found on my blog! )
Edit:
JOHN SAYS: put perspective in the feet
the one that's closest to us should be bigger than the one that's farther away
be careful of the silhouette while fixing my mistake

Because I didn't want to put my poor piece of paper through any more abuse, I attempted to put a new piece of paper over the error and redo it, old-style, but instead of taping it in, I photoshopped it in so you could see the old foot. While I was at it I tweaked the ears a little.
put perspective in the feet
ReplyDeletethe one that's closest to us should be bigger than the one that's farther away
be careful of the silhouette while fixing my mistake