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Verbal Analysis:
-opposing poses
-Sharply contrasting sizes
-Poses flow through line of action
-Lots of negative space surrounding the characters
-there is not much background
-There is little background that occupies a third of the image
-the background and the house on the right side, make a frame around the characters
my attempt
Good analysis
ReplyDeletea lot of people are forgetting to do that
The big guy looks pretty the good
the little guy should be dangling on a a diagonal line of action, not straight up and down
Look at the negative space between the characters
follow your own analysis!
also your proportions are a bit less cartoony (you made the heads smaller)
ok, I'm gonna fix that
ReplyDeletethanks John!