^I tried a digital layout. Having layers is really handy. But I think that drawing for real always is better. ^My last version. Do you mean like this John?
Thanks for your comments on my try. Keep up the good work, too. Hey, John wouldn't have asked if he didn't see something in your work that maybe you don't see yourself. Heck, I was as surprised as you when he asked me.
The one thing I would mention is that the figures look too stiff. Too blocky. Oh, and I've tried drawing digitally years back, I can't get used to it. My mind rebelled against the feel of a plastic pen on plastic paper and staring at the screen. I'll never give up my wooden pencil and paper. =)
Hi Mitch -
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments on my try. Keep up the good work, too. Hey, John wouldn't have asked if he didn't see something in your work that maybe you don't see yourself. Heck, I was as surprised as you when he asked me.
The one thing I would mention is that the figures look too stiff. Too blocky. Oh, and I've tried drawing digitally years back, I can't get used to it. My mind rebelled against the feel of a plastic pen on plastic paper and staring at the screen. I'll never give up my wooden pencil and paper. =)
Thanks, I appreciate the honest feedback :) Maybe I draw it a bid too technical.
ReplyDeleteI prefer the drawing with pencil... but I like to do digital sketchs sometimes.
ReplyDeleteI prefer your drawings made by pencil as well.
keep practicing, with focus on our studies and the help of mr. John K we are going to learn a lot faster.
thanks for the feedback on my studies... I am trying to improve everything always.
I think it seems cramped. You want enough space for all the actions.
ReplyDeleteyes, it's cramped when they are both on the bed
ReplyDeleteplus they are somewhat wonky
remember your construction