Hi everybody,it is good to see your drawings.
I have made more studies.
I think I am getting more used to the model of the characters.. and also tried not to tone down too much the expressions and poses.
I will try to translate the emotional statement that I made for these drawings... actually I have a problem of vocabulary when I try to make the emotional statements in English... I can explain their expressions much better in Portuguese.
abraço,
davi
Nice, I like the expressions. But I think the construction of the face details could be a bit stronger. Like the mouth from Slab in the last screen. But nice work!
ReplyDeleteThere's a problem with the eyes in the first panel, Ernie is supposed to be looking at Slab's fist, not at his own hand.
ReplyDeleteIn the second panel you copied verbatim the "blocking" John did of Ernie's head. He no longer has a jaw now, and looks mushy.
In the third panel you changed Ernie's line of action, and his position. I think his head is supposed to be shrinking down, not going back.