"learning how to walk before run"... as Kali said :)I am going back to copies and construction exercises for a while before practice the layouts again.
The eyes are too big and the hat looks like a deformed popcorn.
I will post more exercises soon.
abraço,
davi
The face needs to be less cramped (it's too big on the head shape)
ReplyDeleteAlso you need to try to get contrast between the wrinkles on his front, and smoothness of his sides.
Make the tie and collar look like it is wrapped around the form of the body.
The exercise is intended to get you to draw differently than normal-to find a way to caricature the FEEL of the rubber toy.
You are treating every part of the drawing the same, with a wiggly scratchy line. Find a line style that FEELS like the object instead of using the same line style you usually use.
OK, I think I understood the ideia better.
ReplyDeleteI will do another one.
thank you professor.