too stiff and toned downyou are turning curves and lines of action into straight linesSlab's whole body and arm should be one curved motion driving his fist into Donald's faceDonald's hands and feet are different, less interesting shapes than the roughwe can't see either of their heads in your drawing, but we can in the roughsyou need to use words to analyze what is in the roughs, so you can maintain everything that is good
Oh! Ok! Perfect!I had doubt with the line of action of the characters. I do not know whether to give more force to the blow, by a straight line, or maintain the curvature of the rough.i'm gonna do it againThanks John!
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too stiff and toned down
ReplyDeleteyou are turning curves and lines of action into straight lines
Slab's whole body and arm should be one curved motion driving his fist into Donald's face
Donald's hands and feet are different, less interesting shapes than the rough
we can't see either of their heads in your drawing, but we can in the roughs
you need to use words to analyze what is in the roughs, so you can maintain everything that is good
Oh! Ok! Perfect!
ReplyDeleteI had doubt with the line of action of the characters. I do not know whether to give more force to the blow, by a straight line, or maintain the curvature of the rough.
i'm gonna do it again
Thanks John!