I'm Back!_Donald Bastard Construction

Update!:

better?

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I tried to choose an easy pose of Donald to understand better his construction.
Here are my first verbal analysis:

- Head same size as body (Head+Beak)
- Big Beak
- Hat almost the same size as body.
- little feet
- Curved LOA
- pose in perspective
- needs outside negative space

Emotional Estatement
Donald it seems to be saying: "Tsk, Tsk, yep, you ARE a fatty loser"

so, here is my first attempt.
what do you think?

2 Slabs and a Bastard *EDIT*

*EDIT* I tried to fix the mistakes I had on the previous drawings. The fixed versions are underneath each one of the storyboard sketches. Let me know what you think! I'd like to hear some feedback!

Hey, I'm back! And it's been forever.

Here's some Slab practices so I can try to maintain the guts of the characters from the storyboard sketch. Right now I feel like I got a long way to go for me to start staging characters within backgrounds, so I figured I'd practice doing some more of these until I get good enough with actual layout making.

*FIXED*

*OLD*

The Slab on top came out pretty good I think. I made his head and cheek area a bit slender. I could've moved the head a bit to the right more and also add more tilt. I do like how the perspective on his feet came out though.

*FIXED*

*OLD*

I tried pushing his pose a bit further in the top one. I could've added more perspective in the head by making it smaller while his body is more closer and bigger towards us. I noticed I strectched out the arm that connects to the big fist too much. Gotta fix that.

*FIXED*

*OLD*

This Donald Bastard was fun to do. I like that I added more perspective on his feet to make his stance seem more balanced. I could've made his arm on the right a bit bigger for it to seem more solid and have his hat stretched out a bit on top, but I had to cramp it a bit for it to fit on the page. I'll fix it though.

I'd like to hear what you guys think!

Funny break

I've decided to give me a break with the mickey staging and make a pose construction from John's storyboard drawings.



More to come.