corrections of my last exercises

I made the corrections with a red pen and will try to explain it (again, sorry about my english)
the body is a lot larger in the original drawing, what makes the character look a lot stornger (I repeated this mistake in almost all drawings) the cheek that I made was too big, the tie was straight and boring, the ear was too big and in the wrong place.

the cheek was bigger than the original, he looked too fat, the left arm was smaller, the eyes are more elliptical (what makes him more expressive), the white shape in his belly is also a lot smaller in the original drawing.

the body and the tie are a lot bigger in the original drawing (I don't know how could not see this while I was drawing), the hat and the left eye are smaller.

the arms are a lot stronger in the original drawing, the sword is bigger, he doesn't have the butt so big, the left shoulder was pushing the head that is also bigger, the weight of the body is holded by the right leg, in my drawing he didn't have weight at all.

I have made this one before I started the corrections, and I can see that it also has a lot of mistakes, I will fix it and post soon with more studies.

this exercises are helping me a lot with my personal work... and it is also very good to see everybodies studies as well, a lot of knowledge all the time.

abraço,

davi