a) head and other body parts either waaay too big, or too small
b) some backwards perspective
c) silhouette is off
d) proportions are wrong


Here is my second attempt. It's better now that I thought about my previous mistakes, but still off.
The Hep Cat cartoon is amazing, lots of beautiful poses, solidity, and dirty jokes haha.
I need to try this dog..
ReplyDeletethe pose is incredible.
and I will look for more of this caracters..
thank you.
It would help if you roughed in the BG and cat.
ReplyDeleteThe dog's body is pointing too far downward, away from the overall pose of the dog stretching forward. You're exaggerating a slight mistake in the original.
The construction is good.