Monday, August 24, 2009

POSING and BACKGROUND by DAVI



Hi everybody,

I am trying to exercise what was suggested here.. posing and background.
I will keep practicing.

abraço,
davi

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3 comments:

  1. Davi CalilAugust 24, 2009 at 12:56 PM

    from the top...

    first:

    one of the ears is too small, the feet are full of weird angles and the objects in the background are in different places.

    second:

    the background is very differente form original, the neck is too long and it also has one ear that is too small.

    third:

    in the original the head of the turtle is almost 90 degree, in mine it is not. I forgot the spots in the back of the turtle, both thumbs of the buny are wrong.

    fourth:

    mine is too fat, the right hand should be closer to the foot, the tail is smaller, the angle inside the mouth is weird.

    that is what I have found until now.

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  2. Kali FontecchioAugust 24, 2009 at 4:13 PM

    That top one is great!

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  3. JohnKAugust 24, 2009 at 8:39 PM

    good

    general comment:

    on 3/4 angles, you are tending to cut off some of the forms


    like the side of Bugs' body and ears-they are too thin


    the hands have been evened out-all fingers are the same length in your drawings, compared to original film frames, where the middle finger is longest

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