Thursday, October 29, 2009

another attempt at Kaspar


Analysis:






I think this is better, at least I feel it that way
what do you think John?
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  1. Chloe CummingOctober 30, 2009 at 4:45 AM

    Sorry to not be John, but that one looks better to me... His face has more form, in the previous ones it looked a bit flat and warped. he just looks more natural here.

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  2. Paul BOctober 30, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    Thanks Chloe! any opinion is well received.

    yeah, I think your right, I was checking my last drawings now and really it seems that they were flatter in his face that my last version, and this one has more space also in his face.

    thanks!

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  3. JohnKOctober 30, 2009 at 4:16 PM

    make it easy for me to comment
    include my drawing

    and show your analysis of my drawing before you start your copy

    My opinion without seeing the original

    still too stiff

    your curves tend to be too mathematical, not organic enough and avoid parallel lines

    you need to combine solidity with organic forms and a strong statement
    that drawer's perspective is all wrong; it is in my original too

    that's the kind of stuff I want layout artists to fix-my mistakes

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  4. JohnKOctober 30, 2009 at 10:36 PM

    you skipped a bunch of steps

    his head has no structure or hierarchy

    his feet are wobbly

    why not pick some other Kaspar drawings I did that are a little more finished to begin with

    and read my latest post with the muscle man

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  5. Paul BNovember 2, 2009 at 7:35 AM

    ok!

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