Wednesday, November 4, 2009

looser version

- The characters are more separated and some negative spaces have been changed. Is that good?
- I think my "more looser version" needs more life in it, push farther the atittudes, make a caricature of them.
-Im happy with some forms, I think some of them feel solid... or more solid than previous versions

UPDATE:

Another Update!

2 comments:

  1. heads are shrinking


    things are getting cramped

    use negative space both within and outside your forms

    dart your eyes back and forth between your copy and the original and you will see the shapes change

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  2. Thanks Pedro, yeah I think the same that you
    Im gonna give ti another try

    Ok John, i will do it.

    Now that a couple of hours have passed after making the picture I must say that I hate it, hahahahaha, I can see the errors. I think it's good some distance before putting the drawings.

    thanks!

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