Toby Tortoise Analysis: Last steps (I think so...)

3.- 3rd Level of Forms - 1st attempt

- I didn't make a good observation first. The feather-necklace is very bad situated.
- In the hip, the small wing that is seen, must go more out, I must have put more attention in the negative space inside.
-The back of the shell of the turtle is smaller. It is more hiden.
- Have to fix the hair of the girl.

3.- 3rd Level of Forms - 2nd attempt

- The feather-necklace is better, I have to show better the form in the arm that is closer to us.
- Now the arm that rests on the hip is smaller! I have fix it.
- The little eye in the girl is bad situated.
- I believe that the bases of the drawing are destroyed by every arrangement. The head of the turtle is very small now, I have to fix it.
- the hair of the girl must follow the perspective and form of the head, like the eyes.
- I destroyed the form of the hole where the turtle shows the head.
-I must raise a little more the peak of the girl.

3.- 3rd Level of Forms - 3rd attempt


-now I made the damned head of the turtle too big!
-I have to put better the poscicion of the hair of the girl
-I have to make better the shape of the hole in the turtle.

3.- 3rd Level of Forms - 4th attempt

-I still have problems with the form of the necklace. The necklace must not exist by himself, must emphasize the form of the breast.

4.- 4th Level of Forms - 1st attempt



Man I felt fear putting the details! I didn't want to destroy the forms.
I must have to draw the feathers?
am I right?

Phew! very hard drawing! goddamned Disney artists!