Toby Tortoise analysis continuation

Getting the shapes right

The shape of the head is more like a thumb, is not a perfect circle, you can see that in the cartoon, check it out!. Also the chest is not a perfect oval or sphere.


The turtle has a ovale shape for the head.
The neck is made from two lines, not perfectly parallels.

1.- General forms - 5th attempt - new drawing


Yep, the head fits better with this new shape
Now, the second level of forms.

New drawing

2.- 2nd Level of Forms - 1st attempt


-The arm of the girl, who is closer to the turtle, is well. Her hand is in a wrong angle
-The arm of the girl who goes to the hip must be bigger
- Hat of girl must be bigger
- Eye of the turtle must be bigger
- Turtle "muzzle-nose" must be bigger
- Turtle hat must be bigger

2.- 2nd Level of Forms - 2nd attempt

- The "muzzle-nose" from the turtle is a bit more bigger, and the smile line has to be more short.
- give more form to the hat of the girl, is a little more big the area in which is the hand
- the hand in the hat is still wrong.

2.- 2nd Level of Forms - 3rd attempt


- The forearm of the girl, the one that touch the hip, has to be more up.
- The hat is too big now, have to fix the feathers too.
- The neck of the turtle is more wide.

2.- 2nd Level of Forms - 4th attempt

Uf! ok, now the details are minimum, I think I can go on to the next step.

To be Continued!