Composition, Construction, Hierarchy

Hi Folks!
I had some problems with the scanner but I already solved them.
Here are some of my last studies.



House
1.- my house is too much inclined towards the left
2.- the wall from which it goes out spooky is lower
3.- All the house must be in perspective. The roof goes becoming smaller backwards.
4.- The chimney is bigger.
5.- The window on the wall more close to us is bigger.

Hill and bushes
1.- The curve from the hill is less pronounced.
2.- The bushes are smaller than Spooky.

Spooky.
1.- Spooky is located badly.


Tom
1.- Tom's head is a little more big.
2.- His muzzle is bigger
3.- The eyeborws are more attached to the head and follow the form.
4.-The ear is less double and more straight. It's bigger.
5.- His body is thicker.
6.-His hands are bigger. They must be more expressive, show the action more clear.
7.- The feet are bigger.

Jerry and Tuffy
1.- They have to be bigger.
2.- His heads are bigger than his bodies.

Bonfire.
1.- Woods bigger
2.- The perspective of the chimney is wrong.
3.- the wall close to us must be in another angle that leaves more space to the pipe.
4.- The pipe must be in another angle, more front to us.


Backgorund.
1.- The BG is too big

Spooky
1.- Is more fat and short
2.- The foot that is close to us must be bigger.
3.- The body is in a wrong angle, it should be turned backwards and not towards us.
4.- The arm that is behind must be turned forward. His hand is more turned backwards.
5.- tha hands are bigger.
6.- The arrow comes from another angle.
7.- Spooky's hat is smaller.


Tom
1.- Tom's head is bigger
2.- The arm is less arched.

Tuffy
1.- it is smaller and chubby
2.- Tuffy's head is bigger than his body

Jerry
1.- Has to be further down.
2.- I even out the sizes of the head and body.

BG
1.- The ice cream pot is shorter and wide.
2.- The perspective of the pot is wrong. We are not seeing the pot from the top.
3.- the balls of cie cream are bigger
4.- The plate is in a wrong angle.
5.- the hat has to be more organic and floppy, the candy has to be more solid


I'll be back with more soon and with some dwarfs too!