My Charlie Dog and Porky

Ok,I have to do post this fast because the subway is gonna close!.



PORKY
1. Porky's head more big
2. Porky is more fat on the bottom
3. the leg is more big.
4. the arm has to be more big, the perspective has to be more strong.

CHARLIE
5. Charlie's line of action is more subtle, i've made it too strong.
6. the foot is in a wrong angle
7. the arm at that it aims must be more raised up.


PORKY
1. Here the LOA of Porky is more marked, I've made it too subtle. The whole body is wrong beacuse of this.
2. Again, is more fat on the bottom

CHARLIE
1. I've made the head too thin
2. The angle of the head is wrong, too forced.
3. The muzzle has to be more big. I did'nt made this beacuse of the short negative space that my drawing have.
4. i've made the legs too thin
5. the arm is more big and the hand.

Well, to try it again!