Monday, November 9, 2009

MORE KASPAR STUDIES + CORRECTIONS


I have drawn the same poses again to try to fix the mistakes.
I hope it had improved. I will draw more Kaspars tomorrow.
thanks for the advices Professor.



More Kaspar studies.
I don't feel that I am getting it right.. it seems to me that is better than the first ones that I made.. but still is not as funny as the original layouts..

I analyzed the emotinal statement and read the story a couple of times in the "JK STUFF" blog to see if I get what is going on in the drawing.

my self critiques are:
first one - there is a weird angle in the chest (I just saw it now) that goes in the oposite direction of the original drawing, the eyes are too separeted, and the hands are too high, the underware needs to be more organic.

second one - I think he has too many circle shapes in my drawing, maybe it would look better it he had more straight lines, specially from the chin to the belly. The hands are very diferent from the original, I don't know if is out of his model.
I will keep drawing.
abç
davi

2 comments:

  1. too wobbly

    and you are changing everything at random

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  2. you are right, I will correct them and post it again.

    thank you.

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