I probably didn't pull it off too well. It feels kinda realistic to me. I was tempted to put in some shading, but didn't.
I think I added way too much lumpiness and wrinkles in his pants and legs.
I tried making the lines feel like rubber by making certain objects swoop into other objects without connecting lines like his right eye and his hand holding the spinach.
I do like how the torso area came out.
I think I was also able to put in the planes you were asking for, John, like in the cuffs, tugged in shirt, and the tips of the shoes.
It was pretty hard to do, but managed to learn a few things I guess.
What do you think?
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The proportions and construction are great.
ReplyDeleteDo you think you could make your line get the feel of the rubber?
Just try it on the head-try some different line qualities.
Also: something everyone is missing
the edges of the cuffs, shirt tucked in, shoe tips
there are planes there that could be suggested in the drawings, but no one has noticed them yet
no, the face isn't off
ReplyDeleteproportionally, it's very close
I'm just talking about the feel of the line
to see if you could make it feel rubbery
you got the extra planes everyone was missing
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