

First rough... scanned for problems, fixed some issues (mostly significant angle and proportions, such as his shoulder)



Finish
Left arm should be thicker and more manly
- Right hand should be smaller (namely the palm-shape less elongated)
- Details should wrap tighter on gut
- Pec muscle should be larger
- I made his chin too big, which stretched out his face; I compensated some cranium details to match. woops.
- Long story short, watch proportions.
Edit: Did another one. (click for stages if you want)


This is a tough assignment
ReplyDeleteyour steps are good
the final placement of features seems slightly off
you want him to feel solid
he looks a bit soft
You're right, ha ha. I was trying to make the details not too bulky so that they worked in hierarchy but, uhh, he IS a bulky manly man so it wound up softening him up a bit in the process.
ReplyDeleteI'll try to make him more solid and manly next time!