
1st Level: BIG forms

- The head
- Body
- Arms
- Hat
- Mallet
- Carrot
I think my line of action is wrong. The original line of action is pointing up and mine is down.
It's a simple composition but totally understandable: This guy is waiting for the rabbit to come out and hit him with the mallet.
The main objects are:
- magic hat
- guy
- mallet
The three objects are evenly spaced but nothing interferes between them, so the three are totally clear and readable.
2nd Level: Secondary forms

The mallet was difficult to do, it's not like most of the mallets that we see in other cartoons, this have rings in it.
I tried to put the features in the face trying to equal the negative space around them.
3rd Level: Details

- Pupils
- Wrinkles
- button
- the strips in the turbant
- etc..
The Mallet is horrible, I've made them in a wrong angles and from there everything else stayed badly.
Check

- the guy in my drawing is too on top of the hat.
- The mallet is awfully BAD!
- The curve of his body is from the other side. Up, not down.
it's still pretty good
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I agree, I think it looks pretty good! Your steps are really clear!
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ReplyDeleteVery nice. Great face! Jones would be proud. =)
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